Chapter 13 – Page 17
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Chapter 13 – Page 17

By on January 24th, 2013

Hopefully the smaller font makes it clear Tilly and Whateley are speaking in lowered voices in the final panel.

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  1. Taurin
    Taurin
    January 24, 2013 at 8:12 am |

    It’s not really that obvious. If the bubbles were bigger with small letters it might be more obvious. I mean, they’d have to be stupid not to be whispering that, but…y’know.

    • Elaine Corvidae
      Elaine Corvidae
      January 24, 2013 at 8:14 am |

      Ooh, good suggestion about the bigger bubbles. I’ll probably fix it before I put it out as a PDF. Thanks!

    • Savail
      Savail
      January 25, 2013 at 12:33 am |

      Ditto that. It just looks like you were trying to fit too much text into the wrong size of bubble right now. Padding does sound like the right track there, maybe. Or taboo italics.

      It seemed obvious he was trying to get Silence occupied, so that the siblings could investigate; therefore, the lowered voices were a natural assumption, though that was coming from character/plot development rather than presentation (not a bad thing either though, of course).

  2. Lurker
    Lurker
    January 24, 2013 at 11:31 am |

    Aha! Confirmation that medusa guards aren’t human (not fully, anyway)