Riven Sol combines Lovecraftian horror with a space station setting.
Rated PG-13 for violence, language, and mild nudity.
February 8-10, 2013
Hopefully the smaller font makes it clear Tilly and Whateley are speaking in lowered voices in the final panel.
It’s not really that obvious. If the bubbles were bigger with small letters it might be more obvious. I mean, they’d have to be stupid not to be whispering that, but…y’know.
Ooh, good suggestion about the bigger bubbles. I’ll probably fix it before I put it out as a PDF. Thanks!
Ditto that. It just looks like you were trying to fit too much text into the wrong size of bubble right now. Padding does sound like the right track there, maybe. Or taboo italics.
It seemed obvious he was trying to get Silence occupied, so that the siblings could investigate; therefore, the lowered voices were a natural assumption, though that was coming from character/plot development rather than presentation (not a bad thing either though, of course).
Aha! Confirmation that medusa guards aren’t human (not fully, anyway)
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